Wednesday, February 27, 2013

Hump Day Hook 3

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Heat up Hump Day with a tantalizing hook for readers...a challenge I take with a group of other authors.




Here's an excerpt from from Chapter 5 of THE PRINCE CHARMING HOAX. We join the conversation as Roxie tells Leah about a interesting afternoon drive she took with a sexy man she met earlier in the day at a construction site.
Roxie gave a low, throaty laugh. “It was like nothing I’ve done before. There we were at the last place he was showing me before heading back, and suddenly he drives his truck around the back of the house on a narrow road that must be a service entry to the property and pulls his truck alongside a guest cottage. We were kind of out of view from the buildings. He doesn’t say a word. He just leans over the console and pulled me to him. And, to tell you the truth, I’m not sure how it happened, but suddenly we were in the back seat of the cab pulling off our clothes and groping each other like two high school kids. I was crouched down on the floor between his legs with his fingers inside me. My mouth’s around his cock, and suddenly we hear voices outside the truck.”
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21 comments:

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    1. Thanks, Christina! Glad you stopped by ;-)

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  2. And then? You can't just stop! Great Hook. grrrrr...

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    1. Thanks, Gem! Nice of you to hop by... :-)

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  3. lol very active snippet! Nice job :-)

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    1. Glad you enjoyed your visit! Thanks, Sandra.

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  4. Yessiree, that was an interesting drive! Nice one.

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    1. Thanks, Flossie! Kinda makes you want to get out more often, doesn't it??

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  5. Very hot - and that was only talking about it! ;) Great hook.

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    1. Thanks for the visit, Lucy. Glad you enjoyed it!

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  6. Holy cow that is quite a hook!! Steamy, sexy...want to know more for sure.

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  7. Thanks for "hopping" by, Sarah. Hint w/o spoiler: And they're just getting started ;-)

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  8. Haha. Oh man, I love this. It really does remind me of high school days and doing naughty things in cars because you couldn't go to your parents house, lol.

    I wonder who is outside the truck. Great hook. Can't wait to read more :)

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    1. Thanks so much! I do remember those days, but at least up north the windows would fog up for protection ;-)

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  9. Definitely anxious to read the whole book....enticing.

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    1. Glad you liked it, Kathleen! Thanks for visiting ;-)

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  10. Holy Cow! You stopped there? Damn....HAWT snippet!

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